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“Sweetheart?” the barely adult man brushed her hair behind her ear, “are you awake?”
When she didn’t answer he expected not. He gently wrapped his arms around her, weaving them through the tubes and machinery, to symbolize he was there for her.

“Hun?” The seventeen-gingered hair girl called out. “Is that you?” She nuzzled her chin into his arm.
“Yes.” He gently whispered into her ear. He kissed the top of her forehead and rested his head atop of her’s.
“You know when you said I love you?” She nodded. “And I didn’t respond?” She nodded again.
“It wasn’t because I didn’t love you… It was because I didn’t want my heart broken,again. But now I know that you were the angel that was suppose to save me… you are my guardian angel.” He kissed her again. She caressed his hand and nuzzled into his arm more.


The light haired man reached for the glistening stone out of his pocket. He placed it onto her finger, took her and hand whispered. “Will you marry me?”

He waited a little bit. When she didn’t respond, he noticed the coldness of her hand. The color had faded from her face. And her sickened heart finally gave way. Tears were brought to his eyes, as he kissed those two frozen lips one last time.
"Don't worry...I can wait forever."
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Author's Comments

This is like amazing!! I really love this one!!!!

For Flash Fiction Month

Word Count:228

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:iconcollectorscaravan:
No! She died!
Ah!
It's brings sadness to the heart.
I'm sorry if I'm blabbling but this really hit me in my soft spot.
Very good job though.

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Writers are liars, my dear.
:icondischanted-love:
Oh thank you!!!

Ya she dies! Its sad!!!

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:heart: ~ With love Erin - Marie ~ :heart:
:iconcollectorscaravan:
She dies!

I can like imagine a hospital and a couple.
The final moments and the answer that never was given!

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Writers are liars, my dear.
:icondischanted-love:
ya I am going in and tweaking it a little bit!!

Look at it in like 20 mins!

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:heart: ~ With love Erin - Marie ~ :heart:
:iconcollectorscaravan:
Okey dokey!

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Writers are liars, my dear.
:icondischanted-love:
Ok I finished my tweaks!!

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:heart: ~ With love Erin - Marie ~ :heart:
:iconcollectorscaravan:
Yeah!
Now time to read it again!

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Writers are liars, my dear.
:iconcollectorscaravan:
Eep!
Even sadder ending. T_T
Though I think it transitioned too quickly from him confessing to her being dead.

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Writers are liars, my dear.
:icondischanted-love:
Well what do you want me to do?

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:heart: ~ With love Erin - Marie ~ :heart:

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