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As my grip tightened yours loosened. The blood spewing out of your wrists disgusted me. The despair in your eyes made me want cry. I loved you so much, what made you want to do this? Was it what I said? Your tears running down your face left clean streaks on your filthy face. And as I pushed your head into my chest more, your body went limp.

Now as I sit here writing you this letter, I wonder what hurts more? Saying something and wishing you hadn’t...or saying nothing and wishing you had?
:icondischanted-love:

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This is a quicky.. The last line is from one of my favorite quotes!!

Day 12 for *Flash-Fic-Month

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:icon314flylight:
Wow that was really beautiful! It sounded so regretful and unique. :+fav:

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Cosplay is dress-up for geeks...admit it. XD
:icondischanted-love:
Oh thank you!!

I wrote that in like 10 mins.. Idk what was going through my head.. maybe regret.. i don't know

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:heart: ~ With love Erin - Marie ~ :heart:
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:icon314flylight:
Lol I do that sometimes with my stuff. But then I always have to re-write the chapters because they don't make sense. XD

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Cosplay is dress-up for geeks...admit it. XD
:icondischanted-love:
well this is Flash Fiction Month

Here

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Check em out!!

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:heart: ~ With love Erin - Marie ~ :heart:
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:icon314flylight:
Coolio! I would join but they say it's too late now. Oh well.

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Cosplay is dress-up for geeks...admit it. XD
:icondischanted-love:
oh well!!! :meow:

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:heart: ~ With love Erin - Marie ~ :heart:
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:iconfoxwolftoasty:
Aww sad. :(

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:icondischanted-love:
Thankies!!

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:heart: ~ With love Erin - Marie ~ :heart:
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:iconiamlestat:
this is very well written. im in tears right now haha i feel like such a loser but the last line rele hit me because earlier this year i lost a friend just like this and this is exactly how i feel

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♥ bella ♥ emile ♥
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